Xtremly Rough

Right i know the timings off really quite badly in some places, but ive tried to time it with the actions of the characters laid out in my head. Looking back at it in some places it seems to hold for too long and in others not enough, but to me it still feels rushed. I know this is because ive tried to do it to the 1 minute deadline and doing it in this way to me feels really wrong, given the strength of the story i feel we should be letting it time itself rather than plugging it with a limit, which is why i would like us to do a film test, its quick, easy and will give us a much clearer example of the timing than guessing at it with the rough thumbnails we have.